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Luftland by *GeneralVyse:iconGeneralVyse:

Categories Digital Art > Drawings > Miscellaneous

©2007-2009 *GeneralVyse
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Another one for you guys, this is about 4/5 hours efforts (from a broken and tired mind ;) ) Hope you like it as well... I'm not sure about the buildings on the left foreground, perhaps they should be more subtle?

Also Zeppelin - too much going on? better without it? tell me what you think! i really wish i could have done these back at school....

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*GeneralVyse Oct 3, 2007, 1:15:07 PM
hmm... already i think it needs more colour...

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~maidenofwar Oct 3, 2007, 1:20:47 PM
wow...this looks...amazing. i think the composition and colour look fine! how do you do this stuff, is it all computer-generated, or it like, sketches by hand, then photoshopped? i dunno, i may be getting it completely freakin wrong..but, yh, this looks awesome!

and what did you study at school?

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~onecrazypirate Oct 3, 2007, 1:56:40 PM
The Zeppelin must stay.
Not only because Zeppelins are awesome but it also adds a bit of variety to the piece. A sort of focal point (maybe, I'm not sure that's the word I'm looking for).

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=atolm Oct 3, 2007, 2:01:48 PM
Lose the lensflare and this will be PERFECT!
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~AndreaKenobi Oct 3, 2007, 2:15:29 PM
Cool ^_^ It looks like Muunilinst

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=mydogatela Oct 3, 2007, 3:28:36 PM
This is beautiful!

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~CdreJohnPaulJones Oct 3, 2007, 4:04:26 PM
Vyse... take this further! :D I like it a lot!

This could be a base image for a pic of the IMPERIAL CAPITAL. This is how I have envisioned it, partly because you described it and I connected your art to it. :D

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~Goldenspring Oct 3, 2007, 4:05:43 PM
Hmm.. I think you might be right about the forground. Also, the backround is all very level, could you vary the heights a bit more?
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*cybernetichero Oct 3, 2007, 6:16:13 PM
It needs the zeppelin as a focus. Maybe the right foreground is a little too much.

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~JanBoruta Oct 3, 2007, 9:55:30 PM
Led Zeppelin! :P The whole thing looks, mm, steampunkish to me, and that's good! :D But I'd place the Led Zep :P on the left sode to balance the roght foreground ;)

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